Review for Fml
Why does my criticism have anything to do with anyhing I write? I have read plenty of good novels and fanfics, I know when someone is having trouble with certain things. If it makes you happy, I'll write something.
Oh and being defensive is exactly what you're doing, explaining your reasoning to make yourself look better is called being defensive.
Also I'm sorry I don't read all the reviews on here. I didn't know someone else told you about it in another review and if I had saw that review then I probably wouldn't have put up this review. I honestly didn't read that review, but you didn't really acknowledge it because from this chapter you didn't listen.
Laney.
Author's response
I apperciate you're criticism and I think that if you had had phrased your criticism in a different way then I wouldn't have taken it as harsely. If you decide to criticise someone elses writing, then you might want to be a little more sensitive about it. From my point of view it seemed a bit rude.
Also I have to to admit, yuor fic was very good.