(#) chino 2006-09-17
Ooooh, i like this first chapter, please please please carry on writing it!
I seriously have nothing to criticise it on, so , yeah, well done!
Author's response
Oh...wow u really think so...Thank U Soooooo much for that review...I appreciate it very much...I'm actually writing the next chapter right now so if u have any ideas u know ur always welcome...infact if u tell me a little bit about ur self ide LUV to use u as a new chacracter!!! Of course that's only if u WANT TO...lol :D