Review for Part One: Enter The Nightmare

Part One: Enter The Nightmare

(#) Evilvixen05 2010-08-19 03:23:49 PM

Nice, structure and liking the story so far. In constructive sense, you should work on running it through spell checker then probably have someone proof read it. ^.^

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