Amusing beyond all reason. It's sweet to see stories about the younger Elric brothers - and funny ones.
However, the way you wrote Ed's speech was a bit disorienting, like 'sowwy' and such. That may be how it sounds, but it throws the reader for a moment. Now, adding apostrophes where sounds are left out, or changing the grammar to sound more childish, is fair game and can be easily understood.
Thanks again!
Author\'s Response: Thanks for the critique; I originally debated a bit about how I was going to do that. It's really difficult trying to write for someone who's about eighteen months old or so, and I wasn't sure how to go about representing it. Thanks for the suggestions; I'll see if I can get it to flow better.