RIGHT.
I have been searching for this story for months since the auditions, trying to keep up with when it was gonna get started. I drew a blank for ages so I gave up hope. I'd figured it would come in a separate post so I didn't subscribe, and then I like I said I stopped searching. Until today I remembered about it and thought how cool the idea sounded and I had a real craving to read it, so I did some more searching, just to see if you had any more information up about it (I hope you know that took me an extremely long time), and I found this! I had no idea you'd even started it and now there's six chapters?! Holy shit dude. I can't tell you how excited I was/am.
On a similar note, that's why I haven't reviewed yet - I had no idea you'd even started writing this yet, so I'm sorry if it seemed like I didn't give a shit/support you/like this. I'll remedy that now.
Straight off, this is fucking awesome. I love the idea, you execute it brilliantly, the banter's really funny, I'm loving the plot so far... I'm just really into this story. I think you're doing a great job on it, it was well worth all that detective work I did to find it and I am definitely subscribing so I don't miss the rest!
Hmm, regarding what you said about getting the characters right, you've done a pretty good job so far, but I'll help you out a bit if you want - I know the information you have isn't all that much. Uh, I'm very sarcastic, I always smirk instead of giggle, I rarely get super-excited or hysterical, I'm usually one-of-the-guys, I always talk about books, music, comics and psychology, and I always prefer villains to heroes. I swear a lot (sorry), am quite happy spending time on my own even though I love my friends, drink way too much coffee, read a lot of the time and am quite introspective about personal things - I don't like to make people aware of my problems. As far as the relationshipy bit goes, I'm pretty laidback and cool and not giggly, flirty or girly, I like to chat to guys about things I'm interested in that we have in common and just hang out, not do like dates or anything, I don't get embarrassed easily, I don't flirt or flutter my eyelashes but I will be the one to make innuendo and raise the temperature, I'm not overly emotional and that's when I get awkward - when I really care about someone and have to admit that to them. I don't like being vulnerable.
...Well that was like therapy. I hope it helps with your character!
Anyway, I am so loving this story, I think you're really brilliant, I hope you're feeling better now after your accident, and I'm so sorry for only just finding this!
xo Harl
Author's response
Harley.
You are a breath of fresh air. You are going to be a major pain in the butt to write though :P but don't worry I love you a lot so I will try my hardest to do you justice. So I'm thinking of the next sex scene I write to be you and Mikey... How do you feel about this? Also what would be the best way to go about this?
I'm so sorry it took you forever and a day to find this story, but I'm glad you subscribed! :)
xo Cal