(#) Zucht 2011-05-16
I like the direction you have taken this chapter. I woulodn't mind if Susan became a regular with Harry. I also wouldn't mind it if Hermione got a little action with Harry, but, you don't seem to be going that way so I'll have to leave it to my fevered imagination. It would be interesting to see Pansy's reaction - say she was spying on Harry for Draco and watched him bringing a girl, say Susan, to 20 orgasms with several pints of his semen.
Really, this is a very good story, it's light and fun... it's nice to smile while reading.
Author's response
Oh Harry and Hermione are going to get together, don't you worry about that!