Review for American Girl.

American Girl.

(#) comatosejoyx 2011-06-02 02:32:33 PM

In your first chapter synopsis and the actual chapter it mentions several times that she's 13. Indiscrepancies there.

Author's response

It says in the chapter entitled "Witness Protection?!" it explains that Zaria is actually 15:-)

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