Review for Clear Blue, What's Behind You?

Clear Blue, What's Behind You?

(#) AdnarimSmada 2011-06-09

I would really love to see what happens with this girl. You have me intrigued...if that means anything to you. :)

You're getting better. Perfect grammar in this chapter and only two spelling mistakes:

likley: likely

realise: realize. (It has a z,not an s. I know it is weird. That's just the way English is sometimes though.)

Like I said before,if you ever get sick of my editing,just tell me to shut the eff up and I will gladly do so. :)