Oh sorry,found another spelling error. Sorry,I'm a little O.C.D when people give me an opportunity to correct grammar.
apologise: apologize. (Again with the z thing,I don't know why my native language likes them so much. Ha,ha.)
thank you so much again! i'll correct it as soon as this is typed;)
and don't worry about it...it's what i wanted people to do! it's helping me so much! remember: i want to improve my english by writing this story so your help is very appreciated:)
i'm currently working on the next chapter, but i have some problems with the story line, because the way i originally planned it...well i don't like it as much as i used to:L