Oh no not the waxer!! Lol it wasn't all that broing and I love how you keep the characers in well character like how archie said
" Yeah later." It just sounded like something he would say. Oh and also Herry is spelled with an E or at least that's how most people spell it oh and Atlanta is a desendent of Atalanta not artimes but I get why you said it for this story it just makes things interesting anyway I should stop typing and you should do more!! Oh yeah I will rate this something good and you are going on my faveorites!!
Author's response
Oh yeah, thanks for pointing it out, I've made the change with Herry's name. And I really appreciate the review!