Review for Characters?

Characters?

(#) ChemicalKissez11 2011-09-28

I'm going to be a rebel and make a guy character :P
Name- Aaron Bates
Age-19
Description- Choppy blond hair that goes down to his shoulders and bright blue eyes. 5'5 (aha shortie)and NOT BULLEMIC skinny. Has a lip piercing.
Killing off? It's your fanfic ;)
Background- Had a terrible disease around the age of 13 that caused him to lose his memory. All he remembered was his name. Since he had nowhere to go, he lived on the streets with gangs and such, so he can hold himself together in a fight. Sarcastic and a little cold. A bit naive, but once you aquire his trust, he is protective, sweet, and funny. He's never been shown real love, so he's a bit akward when it comes to romance.
OMFG you get special abilities?!?- He can create illusions- things that seem real and invoke fear.
Additional info- Has a habit of playing with his lip ring.

And on that note, I am done! victory dance Good luck on the fic!! ;3