Review for Kingdom of the Elements

Kingdom of the Elements

(#) MrTortue 2006-10-13 01:47:02 PM

Well after reading chapter one...i have to say the story went along too fast and you should really slow down the story and explain how they got the powers and not make it just happen...

Author's response

kk ill try to, i was very excited about it
ill explain more in the next chapter
Thanx

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