O_O holy chizz... only thing i have to ask is that you pleasde make chapters longer... you probably could've made this whole story into 1 1/2 chappys... thats my only complaint.. i love it
Author's response
I definetly planned on longer chapters after this one! I post all the chapters off my smartphone with some random notepad app, and a phone keyboard is not the best thing to type on. Thanks for the help! ;D