Hey cool story, very well written. You definitely have a good plot, while technically used by other authors before, you did one better with how well written it is and you seem to have developed a interesting plot with the first dream sequence and then with the more fuller and detailed conversations with hermione and her parents then I believe I have ever seen. Now you have me anxiously awaiting to see where you take this interesting story. In fact you have me really wondering how far you will take this triangle thing?
Author's response
Thank you for your review.
The plotline for year six stands and a rough draft of several chapters is already written. There will be more about Ron and his dreams.
I'm glad you like the conversations. I just tried to write some action sequences and they are horrible.
You might guess where the story leads if you read the summary again ...