Review for Change
Change
(#) tortillachip 2011-11-15 03:13:04 PM
I like this a whole lot. I like how you put a little quote kinda thing that says something good about Gerard, and then Mikey would say the opposite of that. I think that was very clever. I also like how Mikey says he hates Gerard, but he doesn't really. He hates what Gerard is doing to himself. He just wants Gerard to understand how he's hurting everyone around him, and how he can really hurt himself by doing what he's doing. And when Mikey finds Gerard and Frank together after he admitted to that he liked Frank. Gerard's always hurting him. Will Gerard ever learn? I'm more of a Frikey kind of gal, but I don't mind a bit of Frerard. And that part about when he drew the picture and threw it at Mikey was really sad. Gerard is too drunk to understand that people still worry about him, even though it's his body and it's his mouth to drink with
and he can do what he wants. Well, great job on this.
and he can do what he wants. Well, great job on this.
Author's response
Thank you sooo much. The lines in between were meant to be from a sort of "My Hero" homework style thing from when he was little. I'm vey pleased that you liked it! Thank you very much for reviewing! :)
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