Right, everyone's given this great reviews so far, so it's my job to top them... I have no idea how to though. Right, here goes.
I just read the entire story through, and it's actually one of the most interesting I've seen in a while. No idea what's up with Gerard, but you've said enough to make it really intriguing without giving it away. I'm guessing rape or getting beaten up or something, but simply because that's what tends to happen in these types of fics.
Also, I really like the way you've portrayed Frank. He's two different people really, but you've written it well enough to be feasible. Plus, it'll be interesting to see what happens when he goes back to his mates. I mean how he treats Gerard. And just reading that back to myself, I have written it really fucking formally. Hey-ho!
When push comes to shove, this is really good and I'm definitely waiting on updates! Get writing soon!
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Author's response
When I first saw this review I thought, jesus christ, she's written an entire fucking essay on my fic. And I have to say, wow. That's a pretty amazing review. So you should be pretty pleased with yourself:') yeah, I'm trying to make this story have some suspense, so you don't all know what's going on and bugger off leaving me on my lonesome... Whatever.
Wow, thank you about the comments about Franks character, because I've found it difficult to write what he does and shit. I never know when to make him nice or nasty, so thank you for that.
And about your other note concerning the Ryden... I wasn't gonna put Ryden in it, in fact in the chapters I have written so far (I'm about two chapters ahead) I don't think Ryan is even in it, but I can change that and put it in if you want, no problem. Actually, that could be quite interesting, thanks for that.
So, thank you for reviewing and shit, I'm glad you will be carrying on reading. I'll make you feel better now and say your review has been the best so far:')