Review for Do I Run Into Your Arms? Or Do I Run Away Screaming

Do I Run Into Your Arms? Or Do I Run Away Screaming

(#) MCR_love 2012-02-14 10:50:02 PM

GEEERRRARRRDDD! You should've stashed it in that cave you were living in. Or shredded it into a bunch of tiny unidentifiable pieces!
Ha! I loved this chapter. I can't wait to see the drama that ensues when Mikey sees Gerard.
Also, I just wanted to tell you that you sometimes switch from present tense to past tense and it gets a bit confusing. Other than that, the chapter was great and I really loved the imagery in this one. Good job!

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