Oh wow. This was a really good chapter and you know why? Because you're right, it didn't make sense! :D
It described perfectly what both Hayley and Gerard want...and they don't know what they want. It described their lust and the need for pain and all that kinky shit and everything! Great insight into both characters...I actually think this might be your best chapter so far!
Thanks for updating! I thought you'd disappeared! :'(
SF
Author's response
I'm so glad you got all of that! I wasn't sure I wrote it in the right way but that's exactly what I meant for people to get out of it!
Aww, thank you! I worked pretty hard on it but was fairly unsure about posting it so thank you. :D
Ohh, no way! I'm definitely going to be sticking with this story. I'm quite proud of it. I couldn't imagine just abandoning it. X.x
Thanks for keeping with the story!