I like the story it's really amazing but the title bothers me because there is another story on here that has the same title and it kind of seems like you're taking away the originality of the other story because you have the same title (Sorry if I sound mean or if I sound like you copied it or something it's just bothering me! Now I'm sad because I feel like a bad person for pointing it out) but you're story is AMAZING! and I really love it so far!