This entire chapter flowed well. I would feel the aggravation. And I know what that's like. It's like EVERY SINGLE vending machine is placed on this earth to piss hungry people off.
I have bad luck with soda machines. I always get the wrong freaking soda. Sometimes it gives me water and... Why the fuck would I pay for water?
Anyway, loved it. Is this Grant guy going to be a bad thing though? X.x I'm not very trusting of guys, haha.
Looking forward to more!
Author's response
Thank you! I was very worried about the flow because I kept going back and adding more to raise the word count. Not a good idea to preserve original thought flow.
Oh yeah... those things... I remember when my friends and I went to one that the lights were off but when I put in the money they flicked on and gave me the candy... we came very close to making a pagan idol of it then and there. WATER? Lame. I usually just get the wrong soda... since then I have learned to not be picky about my sodas.
I'm so glad you loved it (as always). And as for Grant? Well, we'll both have to wait and see. He isn't fully fleshed out in my head yet, I need to get to know him better like he's a real person or something... I'm not trusting either, they're a suspicious lot they are...