It was not crappy. I basically spent most of my day reading this, due to school being out. This story is amazing and I'm completely in love with it. I currently can't think of any suggestions or anything sorry. But something will come to you, I believe in ya. [insert encouraging words here].. Frank is so adorably sweetly awesomly badass. If you can't think of anything, add a lot of drama. It screws with your readers minds and they can't get enough of it and they keep reading so they can find out if everything gets better, which they really want it too. Plus when add drama your mind kinda filters out all the possibilities of how things can work themselves out. Maybe that's just me, but maybe it'll help you too. Keep writing and please update soon. Sorry this "review" was awfully long.
Author's response
Aww thanks! This has made me so guilty at not updating for a long time, and this makes me feel like it's worthwhile! Just, wow. I didn't realise people would enjoy it so much xD Thank you very much :D