Review for Dear Mom, We're Not Okay.

Dear Mom, We're Not Okay.

(#) Haze 2012-04-02 03:06:13 PM

I really like it. I love the approach you took. Even if the prose and concept aren't exactly fresh in spots, I love how it's Gerard and Mikey, together, like a team. I love the letter to their mom format; you've done so much with characterization, especially indirect with their mom. Awesome work. Moving and cinematic.

- Haze

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I really like it. I love the approach you took. Even if the prose and concept aren't exactly fresh in spots, I love how it's Gerard and Mikey, together, like a team. I love the letter to their mom format; you've done so much with characterization, especially indirect with their mom. Awesome work. Moving and cinematic.

Thank you very much :) I don't think I've ever written anything particularly moving before, and I'm really glad you liked the format; I didn't know how people would respond to that. Thanks for your review ;)

ChemicalKilljoy xo

Hum, I have no idea why your review posted there too...? Ah well :)

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