(#) Worldmaker 2009-09-05Pathetic.
You're getting all bunged up over a fictional character. Seriously, what are you, five? Does it make you feel big somehow to right such bullshit?
Author's responseTo RIGHT the bullshit?
Actually, yes, I do enjoy correcting the bullshit that was the last two books.
Ron abandoned his "best friend" and the "woman he loved" because he wasn't getting enough food. This was in the middle of a quest to save the wizarding world, not do their homework.
Ron shows through most of the series he is a miserable bastard, untrustworthy, and a bigot.
As a father, I would be crushed if my daughter chose someone like him over someone like Harry.
As to your other comments?
Yes, it is a mindless drabble bashing Ron, Ginny, and Umbridge while allowing fun for the H/HR set.
I've got worse coming for the dribbles of the Weasley's so you should probably avoid anything with my name on it and you will be happier.
- Actually it was very funny...in a sick, twisted and utterly disgusting way...but other than the mind churning urge to disembowel myself with a pickle fork...Erm, nemmind. A very well written bit of belly lint.
Personally, think Ron deserves what he got. He tried to screw over his friends and in return, became part of a three way toad and red-head sandwich. Snicker!
Ginny, just got in the way, though, I really don't care for her either.
Umbitch, should end up on a freeway somewhere! Oh, look! Here comes an eighteen wheeler!
I wonder how Dumbledore is going to handle all the backed up toilets throughout the castle.
On the bright side, you've both done the wizarding world an incalculable service through Draco's self-immolation, -and- gotten the right couple together and started the off on some well-deserved naughtiness. Well done, there!
(#) hammerhead 2009-09-08WARNING!!!
This story is sick, disgusting,and will cause you to let loose your Supper & then your coffee through your nose at the end.(guess which is worse). Though to have made it better you could have had Malformed kill the three on the table, then the gorilla snakes before killing himself.Of course it is as good as your others.Good work.
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