Okay now I've read it. And.
Oh muh payoor jeezus tis AMAZING! Not joking, you WILL update this soon, cos it's good, hen.
Also, "She was well past her best." Subtle reference to that time in French? I noticed :3 twas funneh XD
D'awww, fanks bbz. Yes, just a subtle reference likes :3 I will update soon, like next week :3 Tah for readin, henny.