Review for Under City Lights

Under City Lights

(#) ReddyDevil 2012-04-23

OH BRENDON, NO YOU DI'NT!!!!!!! bitchy face (Just so you know, I've been told my bitchy face rivals that of Spencer Smith's)

SERIOUS anger towards that idiot. I'm surprised Ryan didn't go all ninja on his ass and kick his butt. I would've. And I can't imagine the heartache Juliet's gonna have when she finds out she was drugged. -.- Not cool, Brendon. Seriously, is there gonna be any return from this?

(Because they DO get together in the end, I'm guessing, I just had this thought... "Daddy, how did you meet Mummy?" "Well, kids, you see, there's a funny story about that... First date we ever went on, I drugged her!") I know that seems really horrible, but it sounded funny in my head. XD

Random shout out to Jon for being so awesome and... Awesome. Yeah, there really is no other word for him. And I'm interested to see how he and Brendon the asshole know each other.

Anyway, you succeeded with trying to get Juliet to act differently. Yay for you! thumbs up I can't wait till the next chapter! Dun dun duuuunnnnn....

(Oh, and thank you so much for reading and reviewing Phantoms - seriously, you have no idea what reading that did to me!)

P.S. ... I just noticed... I didn't included any Fightstar references... :( Maybe someone's ringtone can be one of their songs! Yes! And I'm still waiting for the random British exchange students! XD

Author's response

That's quite a feat!

Eh, it ALMOST happened but unfortunately... Ryan is quite tame in this story. I didn't write him as awesomely as I could've. =/

Hahaha. oh god, I do know that is terrible and I never mean to make light of a situation where drugging someone is involved but that made me laugh so freaking hard, for a long period of time. You're awesome.

YES! I am a HUGE Jon fan. I had a Jon fanfic written that I was part way through but no one read it or I would've continued. =/ Kind of sad. but yes, go Jon!
Oh, there will definitely be more on that. It goes in and out... then the chapter after this next one goes in to detail.

I'm glad. :D I was iffy on whether I succeeded so thanks.

(I really, really did enjoy it! Sorry it took so long for me to get to it!)

YES! Ringtone time! It's such a good idea but I DON'T want to lose my own focus on them haha.
... Charlie. Me= In love.