Sorry it took me so long to review this, I've just had a lot going on. Anyways...
Great chapter! I loved how you made Mikey have a kind of panic attack, it really showed that he's still nervous as he used to be, even if he has improved a little with help from Frank and Gerard. Pete's reaction to Mikey's bruises/scars was perfect; it clearly got across to the reader how much he cares about Mikey and his longing to help almost bought a tear to my eye. I think that Mikey feeling bad about trusting Pete like this is very interesting and I can foresee it causing problems later on down the line.
Great job and I can't wait for more! :D
Author's response
Thanks. No problem!
I'm very glad that you saw how Mikey is still nervous in certain situations through the panic attack. I was hoping for this point to come through without over doing it. I'm also very happy that you enjoyed Pete's reaction to seeing Mikey's scars and saw how much he really cares. I hope I didn't jerk any sad tears!!! Mikey does feel bad about trusting Pete and it will definitley have an effect later on. I'm very very happy you liked it. The next chapter should be up soon! :)
Thank you for reading and leaving a really nice review!