^^ Little sister using my lines. Not cool. >:(
These are the things I like. I like Alice, she's a great character. Put her in some more! I don't like Burt. But that could just be natural instict. Also I really, really like you're writing style. It is tré unique.
And the accent should probably be going the other way on that e. Testes.
SF
Author's response
Ha I don't have sisters to steal lines off so most of mine are taken from my friends without Ficwad accounts
Alice is my lesbian crush and she will be seen more, she's an important character in the story
I don't like him either! I mean in real life I love him so much but I always make him a douche canoe as a character
Thank you! And I wouldn't have known about the accent -vague hand gesture-