I rated it a little pretibicible because you could see the fact that when Yuki tells Tohru how much he likes her she would like him back and then they kiss. I think that when you write the story you could add a little more spice. As in maybe you could twist it a little so it isn't so predicdble like... Tohru likes him back but she is to embarressed to tell him. Very good ending. I like the sweetness.