FicWad

Ya know, I rarely read stuff on here anymore and even more rarely review it. But I really loved this...
I feel like you freakin' read my mind. I've always imagined that Gerard has a thing for his hair, I guess cos' he's always running his hands through it, and I love that you wrote this, it was my dream come true XD

You were missing quite a few full stops, but other than that there isn't much else to edit from what I could see :)

As far as the smut was concerned for a first go it was fabulous. Honestly. I sure as hell couldn't write smut that good when I first started writing it, and I can tell already as you get more comfortable writing it (we all feel a little awkward at first believe me XD) you're going to really show a talent for it :) With all aspects of your writing actually.

I just really enjoyed reading this, I haven't got into any stories on this site for a long time but I'll definitely be looking out for more of your stuff so keep writing m'dear :D
xo