Review for Undesirables

Undesirables

(#) Shayla_boo 2012-08-02

First I wanted to say this is very good at the least!! :3 I do like it, as much as the memory of Pansy and Mikey's beautifuwl face. :)

Uhmm Wherever ya need me I guess but I would like the part as Frank's friend. I hope ya like.

Name: Shayla 'Say' Becker

Age: 15

Looks: Imma short one, my skin's fair- it's gotta golden undertone but not like 'beach goddess whore' or something, my hair is very short and choppy, it's green with different shades and in a small ponytail. I've also got some sidebangs. My eyes are wide and hazel.

Makeup or peircings: bright red lipstick, eyeliner with wing tips and a middle lip ring, neon pink guages

Personality: bouncy, talkative, curious, awkward around guys I don't know, the peacekeeper, outgoing, silly at times, calm, very independant, a loyal friend, quirky

Likes: Steampunk, gymnastics, rhythm guitar, drawing anime, squirrels, being spun around, the color teal

Outfit: ankle length Ugg boots, green floral tights tucked into them, a grey sweater dress with the picture of Domo on it, green and black striped fingerless gloves

Uhm I think that's about it. If you need more just ask! Looking forword to le next chappy. :3

Author's response

thanks for your lovely review and audition i'll be putting out a new chapter when I get chance xP