Review for Our Lips Touch

Our Lips Touch

(#) RockMusic 2012-08-06 04:31:42 PM

Hopefully the force was Gerard ramming him out the way and not him getting hit. Because if he did I am not going blame the driver. Frank was the one stupidly standing there. You can be in a daze as you walk. Geesus Frank. I love you but you need to... -sigh- I will not get into this right now.

Amazing chapter. I loved all the things going Franks mind I just wished he could move while thinking of it... That boy.. GEESH. If there were any mistakes I didn't notice.

Author's response

yeah it wasn't the Bus drivers fult. Frank could walk tho he was in shock and stuff.

thankyou for reviewing. it makes me so happy to think people really likes my story.:)

i made a mistake

i ment Frank couldn't walk (sorry).

i bet you noticed that mistake. hee hee:)

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