I really like this. I like just found it so... I'm only on the 2nd chapter. But I'm a tad confused. How does he know Fall Out Boy, if it's 1986? I know, it doesn't matter but still. Oh and the part where Ryan just accepted everything he said as truth, was a little unrealistic. But it's fiction so, who cares. I still love this story though.
It is my first fanfic, so yeah.. I am not good with putting it all together really, I think the storyline is good but me writing it isn't that good so yeah, I see your point xD