Review for Yo, hoe

Yo, hoe

(#) ColorfulShadow 2012-08-22

Hey. I know before I was a bitch, and I'm sorry about that, but I have an idea you can use.

Make it where all of the guys are playing a video game like Mortal Kombat or Call of Duty. And there is like a forbidden level. So they go on the level and the next thing they know, they actually end up in the game.

Good idea? Use it if you like.

And I don't know why this is rated down. I enjoyed it.

Can't wait to see more of your writing.

Author's response

I might totally do that!