Review for The Path Chosen

The Path Chosen

(#) whatareyouevensaying 2006-11-04

This is an outstanding start. I can't wait to read more.

I'm sure you've already realized this, but there's a formatting error that seems to come at random. Just scroll through one of the chapters and I'm sure you'll spot it. It randomly inserts a series of numbers and other characters. Pretty weird.

Author's response

Whoops! My bad, but I have an excuse: My MS Works is incompatable with... well, nearly everything. Anyway, that problem is now taken care of. Thanks for your review! Random Shinobi