lol, the previous one is right, it's cool to read your stories! Well, you didn't thank me, but then again, you thanked everyone from this site, and I'm a loyal reader of your fics, so I felt in my place to answer that :-P.
Anyway, great start! Very 'intrigueing'! You really start with putting up a mistery, and that in a way in which you ensure us the rest of the story will be as amazing as always. Good job!
Ciao! xxx Tisia