Review for We're all Fools and Worthless Liars

We're all Fools and Worthless Liars

(#) LaurentheHuman 2012-10-11 11:54:18 AM

First fics FTW! :D
I know nothing about critique so feel free to ignore this, but: I like where you're going with this, however I feel like it moved a bit too fast and it left me confused. Will we get a little backstory to Frank dating Ron later and maybe his sorta crush on Gee?
Anyway, keep writing! I have faith in ya. I'm definitely looking forward to reading the rest. :3

Author's response

Thank you for your honesty :3
And to answer your question, yes there use will be filled ank and Rin on Ron, thats comming in a later chapter i promise. I know it seems rushed, but i didn't know how to start it. But it will get better, i just need to find my ground (if thats the way you'd out it? :L)

dear lord that was an epic fail :L

Yes use will be fill in on Frank and Ron**

fuck it anyway grrrrrr!!! Filled**

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