Review for Do You Feel Like a Man?
Do You Feel Like a Man?
(#) AshIsNotOnFire 2012-11-19 07:02:08 PM
Quite a few spelling/punctuation mistakes, but that can be sorted. Interesting concept. If you use that little more descriptive language, put a little more effort into taking the time to write, this could be stunning.
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