FicWad

Actually, I don't watch TV, I'm blind. Although, I do love to read a good book. That is why I am encouraging you to create the scene for me. It is the sign of a talented writer, one that can create a world that the reader can get lost in while envisioning the world that the author created.
That is the problem with the majority of authors today, they expect the reader to envision the world that they have created without giving the reader a glimpse of what lies within.
Sorry if I raised your hackles somewhat, but I was intrigued slightly by the story and just wanted to see the world as you see it. After all, your story is definitely not following JKR's world and therefore, I doubt that it will look the same either.
As for Buffy and crew, I have read some fan fiction when it has crossed into the Harry Potter universe, but beyond that, I haven't got a freaking clue dude.
And to be honest, you could have fleshed out the first two chapters into something four or five times longer, to give the reader something to sink their teeth into. But it was over just as I was getting in to it. Take the criticism if you want, or don't, its no sweat off of my back, but I was given similar advice when I first started to write.
Now, I'm off to check out the third chapter.
Cheerio.