Review for Harry Potter and the League of Shadows

Harry Potter and the League of Shadows

(#) tgfoy 2012-12-05 03:25:35 PM

Nice start. There are clear formatting issues with this chapter such as lack of spacing and paragraphs. Interesting twists with the characters, compared with Canon which have left me looking forward to more and seeing where you take this.

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