i like this one a lot too... i guess it's because i can see inside it, you know? all the stuff someone's kept in and then it bursts out but no one realizes even though for that person it's like the end of the world. or at least that's how i see it :P
Author's response
Oh yes, there are way too many moments like that to count. To be honest, I guess every one of my poems is like that to some extent, except they're a bit harder to miss than the live ones :P
Thank you, and glad you liked it :)