Hey...loved the fist chapter...but you gotta get better at your spanish (i probably got several mistakes in my english, since I'm 100% mexican...I actually live in mexico....yep yep!! haha)
Several corrections...
Lo /S/iento/Disculpeme...
"Peter was answering one of my questions about my new school, I'm sorry that I was an interruption, it won't happen again"
(Peter in spanish is actually Pedro, just as a fact..as patric is Patricio...Pato as a nickname, Joe is José and Andrew is Andrés)
Peter estaba contestando una de mis preguntas sobre mi nueva escuela, Disculpe la interrupción, no volverá a pasar
Srry if it annoys you...just making somee corrections... :S
Author's response
i like how i now can say FOB members in Spanish now, and thanks for giving me corrections, as i am a bad self-editor (and no hablo espanol, lol). and for all of you that read this response, i used an online translator because i'm lazy. and really bad at spanish (got a B in that class now, omg)