A particularly interesting tale in 'acquiring' Hinata, I'm honestly surprised that you're one of the very few who have used the -pretend to be her teammate- route to get Naruto close to her. I really like that you hadn't forgotten Ino either, and even included her in the beginning which was a "bonus" in my opinion.
Also, I found the mirror scene to be quite interesting as well. The idea could definitely be played for various other females in the series and I certainly hope you keep that in mind for future scenes.
Very refreshing to see the planning part starting to build early instead of later. Could use a bit more detail when the characters interact to make them feel more human, but that's more of a nit pick of mine.
Diligently reading and reviewing, Titan.