Review for MegaMistake

MegaMistake

(#) Mirazal 2013-04-02

Hmm hm hmm okay. I guess I read it too quickly at first.

Okay. Tumblr is dead, okay. And HSG... okay. Okay.

Yeah I totally see the tool part.

Hmm. Unscratched. Which meant he would do nothing, but he did do something. And YouTube still died? Or didn't. Hmm.

I have had a few hours to clear my head and... okay. This will probably make a bit more sense in the next chapter. Hopefully.

Author's response

Tumblr, at this moment right now, is dead. HSG is mentally unstable.
MSPAF ignored the coin toss, obviously. But why? He's already said that she's not entirely important in the timeline. So why would he save her?
Because he likes having her around?

And read up on some of the rules that I've set up, because the next chapter relies pretty heavily on them.