Review for Eroninja

Eroninja

(#) DeathTitan 2013-04-17

Oh boy, almost forgot about Sakura's sort of crisis/revaluation she'd been going through. Very nice to see you bringing that back to attention, Sakura's situation is fairly unique. Originally, I wouldn't have cared that Sakura suffered and she's the best example of 'you don't know what you got until it's gone'.

However, I've learned to appreciate characters being given a second chance if you will. Which seems reasonable for me to assume, since you're bothering to go this far into Sakura's character and developing it even further from canon's version. Plus, it kind of gets to being a sort of drag after a while with her character being held responsible entirely. Naruto's not exactly a saint in regards to their -relationship-, so I wouldn't mind seeing a bit more of Naruto's faults regarding that later on.

Although, I do like that Ino's on Naruto's case about it. I couldn't really not see Ino trying set Sakura straight given their renewed friendship. Kudos there, but I'm surprised that Tsunade's not taking more of part to help her own apprentice. I mean, sure she only took in the girl probably because she had some potential and that she meant the world to Naruto. But I suppose that could her brand of 'tough love' or partial resentment that you'd showed in earlier chapters. So I'll wait and see where it goes.

Hana and Tsume's scene was a great scene to read, it made Naruto seem so much more even without his signature moves. Not many write out such a casual situation where he bags both mother and daughter in practically the same setting, very memorable in my eyes.

Cheers, Titan.