Review for Kicked Out
(#) syphonycometh 2006-11-21 07:59:45 PM
Imagine what a couple of months does for a person! Why can't everyone elses stories have your kind of flow? Seriously, it was comfortable reading and a tad bit on the depressing side. The grammar is a 300% improvement from your last story I read. I could rant on, but saying good job with the story may suffice. Keep it up.
I'm having fun with this xD I actually wrote it because I was grounded and a bit to much energy. Like I said i'm having fun =]
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