Review for Kicked Out
(#) syphonycometh 2006-11-21 07:59:45 PM
Imagine what a couple of months does for a person! Why can't everyone elses stories have your kind of flow? Seriously, it was comfortable reading and a tad bit on the depressing side. The grammar is a 300% improvement from your last story I read. I could rant on, but saying good job with the story may suffice. Keep it up.
I'm having fun with this xD I actually wrote it because I was grounded and a bit to much energy. Like I said i'm having fun =]
Frerard christmas oneshot! who knew decorating the tree could be so fun? fluffiness and cheese! [201...
- Authors: 426510
- Stories: 40066
Lazer Queen is a dedicated Killjoy that is seeking revenge for her best friend who was killed by the...
Izzy falls in love with a groupie
In: Guns n' Roses
Bert McCracken prison AU.
In: The Used
Prom night is one among all the primary times in a teen girl's life once she gets to expertise the g...
In: Street Fighter
Fifth one of my series, "Ghost Doll." Nakata Rieko wasn't exactly an angel of a student. She was hig...
In: Yami no Matsuei