Something seems up with Astoria. I feel that is important. The setup for something bad will happen doom and gloom feeling was done well.
Although overall the chapter did seem a little rushed. Hopefully we see the fallout of this chapter soon.
Thanks for the interesting read. Looking forward to more.
Author's response
Thank you for commenting!
I'm sorry it felt rushed to you. It seemed to take forever to write from my perspective. I hope you like the next chapter.