Review for Clandestine

Clandestine

(#) rawrlittledino 2006-11-25

Hey. It seems like a great story so far.
I'm hoping to see where this goes.
I like the idea of the tatoos, very cute.
One piece of advice; It's Joe, not Jon.
I'm not critisising, just informing.
=]
Write more soon, and if this is your first story, it's good, and welcome to ficwad.

- - Izzy