Quite the unplanned party ending, there. I'm sure Slughorn will be more careful in the future. Meanwhile, I daresay Astoria will be rather surprised at being caught so easily; her infatuation with Draco may literally be the death of her. I'm sure that Tom will not be happy about losing both Malfoys, particularly if the Head of the DMLE puts them somewhere he can't get to to kill or release them.
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