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A Different Sort of Bond
A Different Sort of Bond
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ibskib
2014-05-19
I noticed a few missing pronouns, you should probably look through it again, and perhaps something to watch out for in the future.
Author's response
Thank you!
I'll try to fix that and be alert to it in the future!