Good chapter, though I think you need to reread your chapter 22. Hecate said they had to stay within a meter of each other at all times.
No biggie, great work. Keep it up.
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If I did put in the one meter comment I'll have to go change that. It doesn't quite fit with the current outline of where the story goes from here.
Thank you for pointing out the one meter thing. I'll go fix that now.